February
14, 2014
Mary
Beth,
You
are patient
You
are kind
You
are patient
With
Zack and with Nick
When
they bring worries to you
When
they argue, fight
You
listen to their troubles
Now
all will be well
You
are kind
When
people are mean
Your
peaceful heart loves them back
When
ignorance comes
Deep
breaths you offer and smile
Refusing
to judge
Love
is patient
Love
is kind
You
are Love, Mary Beth
You
are Love
Poems have rhythm. That's what makes them poems and not just
collections of random words. Some poems rhyme, but many don't. This poem gets
it's rhythm from the syllabication or "sounding" of the words. It's
based on the number of sounds or syllables in each line. Pay attention to the numbers in parentheses. They are the number of syllables in each line:
February
14, 2014
Mary Beth,
You are patient
You are kind
You are patient
With Zack and with Nick(5)
When they bring worries to you (7)
When they argue, fight (5)
You listen to their troubles (7)
Now all will be well (5)
You are kind
When people are mean (5)
Your peaceful heart loves them back (7)
When ignorance comes(5)
Deep breaths you offer and smile (7)
Refusing to judge (5)
Love is patient
Love is kind
You are Love, Mary Beth
You are Love
Now it's your turn. Write a Love is Patient, Love is Kind poem of your own. It can be for anyone you know who shows patience and kindness. It must follow the pattern above. Bonus opportunities: Create a selfie video and post it to your blog under the text. Share the poem by reading it aloud and videorecording yourself reading it to the person for whom you wrote it.
Here's another example:
Here's another example:
Nick
You are patient
You are kind.
You are patient
When you walk the dog
Without being asked at all
When Gina tells you
Stuff that you already know
When you wait to talk
You are kind
When Zack calls you names
And you want to wring
his neck
When kids say dumb stuff
And you refuse to go there
You rise up above
Love is patient
Love is kind
You are Love, Nick
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